i talk to some pro but the cost is fucking high for and indie like me (doing the full proyect would cost me 9 times the earnings till now). Maybe in the future or when the users help me.
Like i said, if you join my discord you could help me to fix it. I corrected some words for next update, but mostly typos like "allready, inmobilize and so"... But i know there´s a lot of work to go hehe
How's that proofreading going? This game is unplayable. It looks fun but I can't get past the broken English on nearly every screen.
Yeah paying a professional is expensive, but if you just used a text editor with spellcheck like Google Docs or whatever then it would improve things. It's just sloppy and there's no excuse.
I will eventually focus on this, but up to know, I'm really focusing on RBL2, which is the current project I'm working on. And I think I'm becoming a little better at the language hehe. I'd really love to have the time to focus on both, but for the moment, I don't. :(
Although most of the ppl say RBL1 has a lot of mistakes, everybody said it's understandable.
Version 0.5 is now FREE, im sorry for the delay, i´m having real life issues with my daughter and my mind is kind of off... I´ll probably release 0.6 free in november. And Part 2, maybe this weekend.
ok i have a question if you just release version 0.6 to patrons and also say it will be free in a few days and its been a few days why is version 0.5 still 3$ at the same price as 0.6 and only o.4 is free to play why is there a spot that every time iv been throw Trianna’s quest line that day 24 of hers i cant seem to get to see because it stops me aftter beating the jikininse with horns that the cop shoots the mc??????????? it is really pissing me off because it says its should be able to bee seen but i cant. so why the heck is version 0.5 3 $ still and 0.6 just let out to patrons and is also 3 $ ??????????
People that support the game in patreon or here, should have their benefits, don´t worry 0.5 will be released soon, but i´m working on the Part 2 now, and it´s been a complete rework of the entire game, so it took me a little longer than expected. But i´m still fully working on this... Very soon!
ok i understand but can you tell me why i cant even get to trianna’s seen the 24 day for her? iv tried to do everything posible to get to her 14 day and i only end up with the fight….
I like the idea, but the game is pretty stat reliant and you need to get a perfect mix to get all the scenes, but it is still pretty good but not for me
Like i said, i have a discord to help me with that... But up to now there was no feedback... If things keep going fine, i´ll probably hire someone to fix all the grammatical horrors.
I´ll release 0.5 when the part 2 is launched, should be this or next weekend for sure. I was about to release something last weekend, but i was asked for more content.
FIRST RELEASE!! I have the first playable version of the game ready, im just finishing the translation to english, i guess i´ll have it on MONDAY!!!, its been a long month since i started, but this going live... Im excited, and hope it works fine, and you guys doesn´t hate it xD. PS: I may finish it on sunday, but i cant promise anything.
Yeah, i know, nobody is actually reading this, but maybe in the future someone will. I finally ended all the CGs of the game, i know they look a bit crappy now, but after like 3 weeks of 14h/day making them, its a big goal. Im starting now to work in the first Beta or alpha version of the game, i think i will have something in a few days. This project started like 1 month ago, im fully focusing on this, but in 10 days im going back to work, and i wont have that much time, but im still going to focus in my free time.
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Did you get the writing fixed yet?
i talk to some pro but the cost is fucking high for and indie like me (doing the full proyect would cost me 9 times the earnings till now). Maybe in the future or when the users help me.
hey I'm happy to help however I can in my free time if you need any help lmk
really enjoyed the game and I'm happy to do something to help since I enjoyed the game for free lol but yeah thanks and the offer stands :)
Like i said, if you join my discord you could help me to fix it. I corrected some words for next update, but mostly typos like "allready, inmobilize and so"... But i know there´s a lot of work to go hehe
A member started doing a proofreading check, he just started but it´s a beginning!
How's that proofreading going? This game is unplayable. It looks fun but I can't get past the broken English on nearly every screen.
Yeah paying a professional is expensive, but if you just used a text editor with spellcheck like Google Docs or whatever then it would improve things. It's just sloppy and there's no excuse.
I will eventually focus on this, but up to know, I'm really focusing on RBL2, which is the current project I'm working on. And I think I'm becoming a little better at the language hehe. I'd really love to have the time to focus on both, but for the moment, I don't. :(
Although most of the ppl say RBL1 has a lot of mistakes, everybody said it's understandable.
Version 0.5 is now FREE, im sorry for the delay, i´m having real life issues with my daughter and my mind is kind of off... I´ll probably release 0.6 free in november. And Part 2, maybe this weekend.
can you pl add anal sex
Part 2 will probably have that!
but i do really like the game its just pissing me off that i know i cant get passed day 24 because im still stuck with the 0.4 version
ok i have a question if you just release version 0.6 to patrons and also say it will be free in a few days and its been a few days why is version 0.5 still 3$ at the same price as 0.6 and only o.4 is free to play why is there a spot that every time iv been throw Trianna’s quest line that day 24 of hers i cant seem to get to see because it stops me aftter beating the jikininse with horns that the cop shoots the mc??????????? it is really pissing me off because it says its should be able to bee seen but i cant. so why the heck is version 0.5 3 $ still and 0.6 just let out to patrons and is also 3 $ ??????????
People that support the game in patreon or here, should have their benefits, don´t worry 0.5 will be released soon, but i´m working on the Part 2 now, and it´s been a complete rework of the entire game, so it took me a little longer than expected. But i´m still fully working on this... Very soon!
ok i understand but can you tell me why i cant even get to trianna’s seen the 24 day for her? iv tried to do everything posible to get to her 14 day and i only end up with the fight….
If you need any help, i´ll gladly help via the discord https://discord.gg/5ZrS3HAPwb
Is there any diffirence between android and pc version 0.6?
No, they are the same.
oh thanks again
so frustrated on the prefect mix of point, damn i am here for fun not to get angry, i deleting it ....
What got you that frustrated??
i think he mean is to unlock or trigger a event/scene, player must reach high point (charisma,strength,agility,etc....)
and it's impossible to unlock all cutscene in 1 save load
Yeah, part 2 will not force the player to reboot.
I like the idea, but the game is pretty stat reliant and you need to get a perfect mix to get all the scenes, but it is still pretty good but not for me
Can you get someone to proofread the text?
Like i said, i have a discord to help me with that... But up to now there was no feedback... If things keep going fine, i´ll probably hire someone to fix all the grammatical horrors.
That's great to know since I enjoyed the part of the game I did play.
Yeah, my english is not that good, and i know that a goo writing helps a lot... I will have to look for a pro service.
how do i pass when you "molest" Lilly for the first time?
Are you going to allow us to name the main character at some point?
It was possible at the beginning, but then i changed it... I didn´t thought it was an important feature....
looking good, well i'll wait the free 0.5 for testing it.
Thanks!, I´ll have the next version really soon, and then set the 0.5 free.
ok so you have 0.6 out and still have not set 0.5 to free ?????? did you forget
I´ll release 0.5 when the part 2 is launched, should be this or next weekend for sure. I was about to release something last weekend, but i was asked for more content.
well then when something like that happens why not do a small update post. and why say o.6 was released to patrons as well?
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Would you like some assistance with the English? I don't mind correcting it for you. The game is great, overall.
Yeah for sure!, I have a discord with a channel dedicated to that... Sadly it´s empty hehe.
What's the cheat code?
The cheat codes are for patrons, to make the game easier!
It's an alright game but the English needs to be spell checked.
So there is no english version?
Game is in english 100% it´s also 90% spanish translated
You can change the language in the game-->preferences
Version 0.6.0 Released!!!! But only for patrons.... But it will be available for all in a few days!!!
Version 0.4.0 Free for all since today!
Version 05. Released!!!! But only for patrons.... But it will be available for all in a few days!!!
well a month is not a few days
Version 04. Released!!!! But only for patrons.... But it will be available for all in a few days!!!
looking good
Thanks man!
Hey guys!!!! New version!!!!
Hey there, im still here full working on the game... I´ve done a few events to update, and i think i might have a new version this weekend!
GAME RELEASED!!! (v0.1)
First game version is here now!!! Remember is NTFW (Not safe for work).
-- MEGA DOWNLOAD --
-- DRIVE DOWNLOAD --
FIRST RELEASE!!
I have the first playable version of the game ready, im just finishing the translation to english, i guess i´ll have it on MONDAY!!!, its been a long month since i started, but this going live... Im excited, and hope it works fine, and you guys doesn´t hate it xD. PS: I may finish it on sunday, but i cant promise anything.
Yeah, i know, nobody is actually reading this, but maybe in the future someone will. I finally ended all the CGs of the game, i know they look a bit crappy now, but after like 3 weeks of 14h/day making them, its a big goal. Im starting now to work in the first Beta or alpha version of the game, i think i will have something in a few days. This project started like 1 month ago, im fully focusing on this, but in 10 days im going back to work, and i wont have that much time, but im still going to focus in my free time.
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Hey! someone is here! xD
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